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M.E. Proctor's avatar

Good, sensible stuff, Douglas. Years ago, a friend told me I should write romance. There was (and still is) a huge demand. I didn't have to think about it for long. I absolutely could not write a bodice-ripper, my mind doesn't work that way. I knew without a doubt that it would turn into something else, probably funny, maybe slightly horrific, definitely what "the market" wanted... as if the market ever knew what it wanted!

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Outcast Press's avatar

Another good editing tip is to print out the book, and use a red pen. There’s some evolutionary story about how red makes one more critical (I don’t know—my dissertation advisor told me this and it seems to work).

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Douglas Lumsden's avatar

When I was teaching, I always used a red pen to correct papers. There were some who told me I shouldn't use red because it was "too intimidating." But intimidating is kind of what I was going for, right? I wanted my comments to get attention!

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kenneth M Gray's avatar

All that matters is the story and the characters in the story. It's what keeps me turning the pages.

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Douglas Lumsden's avatar

Right on!

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kenneth M Gray's avatar

Great read, great advice in particular bout "rules".

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Douglas Lumsden's avatar

Thank you! I get tired of people telling me what I'm supposed to do, especially when most of it is bullshit.

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Douglas Lumsden's avatar

They say that the money’s in bodice-ripping. I don’t think I could stop laughing long enough to write it🤣

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